09-27-2006, 08:43 PM
Hey all, I was just working on a alternate history/steam punk campaign setting, and I wanted some feedback as to how it sounded. Its written in story form, as it is supposed to be an intro to a story.
There has always been magic in the world. Since the beginning of time, it was been that way. The ancient Druids and Egyptians were first, and they cultivated it, and harvested the magic for their own use. Next the Greeks soon discovered the way to manipulate the magical ley lines that ran through the entire planet, which were the source of all magic in the world. The societies flourished, and soon 5 types of magic became dominant above all others. As complicated as they are, they remain simple in description.
First are the green mages. Wardens of the environment, they are. It is rumored that the druids of Britain were the first ones to fully embrace the magic. They have control over all of nature, be it plants or storms. Green mages are considered to be some of the more benevolent mages of the Five Arts.
Then came the Red Mages of Ra. The Egyptians were first to practice this Art. The Red Mages have control over some of the greater elements of the world, namely of fire and earth. They are brutish spell casters, often some of the more competitive as well. The Red Mages, none-the-less are honorable individuals.
The Blue Mages of Crete came next. They were masters of the ocean, and of the powers of the wind. Blue mages are just like the winds, unpredictable. Blue mages are often the most cunning, or the most intelligent mages of all the Five Arts.
Even in magic, there is always opposition. During the Crusades, there came to be two opposing forces of magic that came into play, the magic of the Black Mages of Babylon, and the White Mages of the Rose. The White Mages were masters of all sorts of spells dealing with True Arcane, as well as enchantments, and some conjures. Black Mages however were more known for their mastery of necromancy. They had the power to not only inflict their enemies with all manner of plagues, diseases, and poisons, but they had the ability to raise them back to life, after their grim spells had taken effect.
All the mages wield their magic, through an ability simply called The Gift. The Gift does not come to all people, as can be expected, only to a rare few. No one knows why, or how. Anyone with The Gift is usually gathered up, and brought to one of the many colleges across Europe, to better define their skills.
However, all that was to change. During the 15th and 16th century, there came a man, who changed everything. The man, of course, had no Gift whatsoever, but he still wanted to partake in the vast powers of the magical ley-lines. The man became an inventor, creating objects that manipulated the ley lines, into basically mimicking the Mageââ¬â¢s powers. To say that they were as great as the mageââ¬â¢s powers, would be ignorance, but it would also be ignorance to say that they were something to be ignored. That man was Leonardo da Vinci, and he was the first recorded Artificer. Numerous others followed his works and teachings, correcting it as they went along, such notable people such as Galileo, and Sir Isaac Newton. Numerous High Arcanists found these men, and others to be committing an abomination against the beauty of Magic, and several were in fact punished for it.
From the 17th and the 18th Century, increased persecution against the Artificers, forced them to migrate to the Americas, where Artificers became a dominant factor of life, the supreme symbol of industrialization. Currently, only America and Russia are countries were artificers reign supreme, and are encouraged, funded, and allowed. Almost all other areas in the world, either discourage the practice, or ban it outright. These laws have been the cause of several wars throughout the history of the world. Now everything seems to be at a steady stand-still. America, and Russia seem content to ignore the rest of the world, and they are just as content to ignore them back.
There has always been magic in the world. Since the beginning of time, it was been that way. The ancient Druids and Egyptians were first, and they cultivated it, and harvested the magic for their own use. Next the Greeks soon discovered the way to manipulate the magical ley lines that ran through the entire planet, which were the source of all magic in the world. The societies flourished, and soon 5 types of magic became dominant above all others. As complicated as they are, they remain simple in description.
First are the green mages. Wardens of the environment, they are. It is rumored that the druids of Britain were the first ones to fully embrace the magic. They have control over all of nature, be it plants or storms. Green mages are considered to be some of the more benevolent mages of the Five Arts.
Then came the Red Mages of Ra. The Egyptians were first to practice this Art. The Red Mages have control over some of the greater elements of the world, namely of fire and earth. They are brutish spell casters, often some of the more competitive as well. The Red Mages, none-the-less are honorable individuals.
The Blue Mages of Crete came next. They were masters of the ocean, and of the powers of the wind. Blue mages are just like the winds, unpredictable. Blue mages are often the most cunning, or the most intelligent mages of all the Five Arts.
Even in magic, there is always opposition. During the Crusades, there came to be two opposing forces of magic that came into play, the magic of the Black Mages of Babylon, and the White Mages of the Rose. The White Mages were masters of all sorts of spells dealing with True Arcane, as well as enchantments, and some conjures. Black Mages however were more known for their mastery of necromancy. They had the power to not only inflict their enemies with all manner of plagues, diseases, and poisons, but they had the ability to raise them back to life, after their grim spells had taken effect.
All the mages wield their magic, through an ability simply called The Gift. The Gift does not come to all people, as can be expected, only to a rare few. No one knows why, or how. Anyone with The Gift is usually gathered up, and brought to one of the many colleges across Europe, to better define their skills.
However, all that was to change. During the 15th and 16th century, there came a man, who changed everything. The man, of course, had no Gift whatsoever, but he still wanted to partake in the vast powers of the magical ley-lines. The man became an inventor, creating objects that manipulated the ley lines, into basically mimicking the Mageââ¬â¢s powers. To say that they were as great as the mageââ¬â¢s powers, would be ignorance, but it would also be ignorance to say that they were something to be ignored. That man was Leonardo da Vinci, and he was the first recorded Artificer. Numerous others followed his works and teachings, correcting it as they went along, such notable people such as Galileo, and Sir Isaac Newton. Numerous High Arcanists found these men, and others to be committing an abomination against the beauty of Magic, and several were in fact punished for it.
From the 17th and the 18th Century, increased persecution against the Artificers, forced them to migrate to the Americas, where Artificers became a dominant factor of life, the supreme symbol of industrialization. Currently, only America and Russia are countries were artificers reign supreme, and are encouraged, funded, and allowed. Almost all other areas in the world, either discourage the practice, or ban it outright. These laws have been the cause of several wars throughout the history of the world. Now everything seems to be at a steady stand-still. America, and Russia seem content to ignore the rest of the world, and they are just as content to ignore them back.